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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Paragraph C, sentences 7 through 11: In 1947, a group of interested citizens . . . would be a landmark of our time." Which revision should be made to the placement of this paragraph?
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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Sentences 12 and 13: The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of these sentences? If the original is the best way, choose option a.
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Yoga A (1) One of today's hottest fads is also one of the world's oldest practices the ancient art of yoga. (2) Yoga is different from other fitness activities because it is not only physical. (3) In the correct form, yoga is a practice of unification: an emotional, spiritual, and physical exercise. B (4) A simple sitting pose such as staff pose, for example, requiring that you to tighten and lengthen stomach, back, and arm muscles as you stretch your legs out in front of you and place your hands by your side. (5) More difficult poses, such as brave warrior, require you to balance on one leg and hold a pose that strengthens leg, back, and stomach muscles. (6) Though they may seem easy to those who have never practiced, yoga poses require great concentration, and they are surprisingly effective in stretching and strengthening muscles. C (7) While yoga tones and strengthens the body, it also tones and strengthens the mind. (8) Many poses can be only held if you are completely focused on the task, and full benefit of the poses are coming only through proper breathing. (9) Concentrated, deep breathing during yoga helps you extend more fully into the poses. (10) Thereby gaining greater benefit from the stretch. (11) And the steady circulation of breath through you're body both calms and energizes. D (12) I am still relatively new to the practice of yoga. (13) I have been practicing yoga for only one year. (14) I am addicted to yoga unlike any other physical activity because it is also a spiritual practice. (15) Through yoga, I am able to release tensions that lodge in various parts of my body: the tight shoulders, the cramped legs, the belly that is in knots. (16) The physical release is also a spiritual release. (17) I feel calm after doing yoga, reconnected to my body, and reconnected to my inner self. Sentences 11: The steady circulation of breath through you're body both calms and energizes. Which correction should be made to sentence 11?
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Yoga A (1) One of today's hottest fads is also one of the world's oldest practices the ancient art of yoga. (2) Yoga is different from other fitness activities because it is not only physical. (3) In the correct form, yoga is a practice of unification: an emotional, spiritual, and physical exercise. B (4) A simple sitting pose such as staff pose, for example, requiring that you to tighten and lengthen stomach, back, and arm muscles as you stretch your legs out in front of you and place your hands by your side. (5) More difficult poses, such as brave warrior, require you to balance on one leg and hold a pose that strengthens leg, back, and stomach muscles. (6) Though they may seem easy to those who have never practiced, yoga poses require great concentration, and they are surprisingly effective in stretching and strengthening muscles. C (7) While yoga tones and strengthens the body, it also tones and strengthens the mind. (8) Many poses can be only held if you are completely focused on the task, and full benefit of the poses are coming only through proper breathing. (9) Concentrated, deep breathing during yoga helps you extend more fully into the poses. (10) Thereby gaining greater benefit from the stretch. (11) And the steady circulation of breath through you're body both calms and energizes. D (12) I am still relatively new to the practice of yoga. (13) I have been practicing yoga for only one year. (14) I am addicted to yoga unlike any other physical activity because it is also a spiritual practice. (15) Through yoga, I am able to release tensions that lodge in various parts of my body: the tight shoulders, the cramped legs, the belly that is in knots. (16) The physical release is also a spiritual release. (17) I feel calm after doing yoga, reconnected to my body, and reconnected to my inner self. Sentences 12 and 13: Sentences 12 and 13: I am still relatively new to the practice of yoga. I have been practicing yoga for only one year. Which is the most effective combination of sentences 12 and 13?
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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Sentence 5: The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. Which correction should be made to sentence 5?
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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Sentence 7: In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. Which correction should be made to sentence 7?
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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Sentence 9: The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. The most effective revision to this sentence would begin with which of the following?
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The Gateway Arch A (1)The skyline of St. Louis,Missouri, is fairly unremarkable, with one huge exception: the Gateway Arch that stands on the banks of the Mississippi. (2)Part of the Jefferson National Expansion Memorial, the Arch is a remarkable monument builded to honor St. Louis's role as the gateway to the West. B (3)Construction on the 630-foot-high structure began in 1961. (4)The construction was completed four years later in 1965. (5)The monument includes an underground visitor center that explores westward expansion threw galleries and a theater. (6)Two passenger trams take visitors to the Observation Room and the Museum of Westward Expansion at the top. C (7)In 1947, a group of interested citizens held a nationwide competition to select a design for a new monument that will celebrate the growth of the United States. (8)Other U.S. monuments are spires, statues, or imposing buildings. (9)The winner of this contest was a plan for a completely unique structure. (10)The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. (11)In designing the Arch, Saarinen wanted to "create a monument which would have lasting significance and would be a landmark of our time." D (12)The Gateway Arch is a masterpiece of engineering. (13)A monument even taller than the Great Pyramid in Egypt, and in it's own way, at least as majestic. (14)The Gateway is an inverted catenary curve, the same shape that a heavy chain will form if suspended between two points. (15)Covered with a sleek skin of stainless steel, dazzling bursts of sunlight are often reflected by the Arch. (16)In a beautiful display of symmetry, the height of the arch is the same as the distance between the legs at ground level. Sentence 10: The man who submitted the winning design Eero Saarinen later became a famous architect. Which correction should be made to sentence 10?
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Yoga A (1) One of today's hottest fads is also one of the world's oldest practices the ancient art of yoga. (2) Yoga is different from other fitness activities because it is not only physical. (3) In the correct form, yoga is a practice of unification: an emotional, spiritual, and physical exercise. B (4) A simple sitting pose such as staff pose, for example, requiring that you to tighten and lengthen stomach, back, and arm muscles as you stretch your legs out in front of you and place your hands by your side. (5) More difficult poses, such as brave warrior, require you to balance on one leg and hold a pose that strengthens leg, back, and stomach muscles. (6) Though they may seem easy to those who have never practiced, yoga poses require great concentration, and they are surprisingly effective in stretching and strengthening muscles. C (7) While yoga tones and strengthens the body, it also tones and strengthens the mind. (8) Many poses can be only held if you are completely focused on the task, and full benefit of the poses are coming only through proper breathing. (9) Concentrated, deep breathing during yoga helps you extend more fully into the poses. (10) Thereby gaining greater benefit from the stretch. (11) And the steady circulation of breath through you're body both calms and energizes. D (12) I am still relatively new to the practice of yoga. (13) I have been practicing yoga for only one year. (14) I am addicted to yoga unlike any other physical activity because it is also a spiritual practice. (15) Through yoga, I am able to release tensions that lodge in various parts of my body: the tight shoulders, the cramped legs, the belly that is in knots. (16) The physical release is also a spiritual release. (17) I feel calm after doing yoga, reconnected to my body, and reconnected to my inner self. Sentence 4: A simple sitting pose such as staff pose, for example, requiring that you tighten and lengthen stomach, back, and arm muscles as you stretch your legs out in front of you and place your hands by your side. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of sentence 4? If the original is the best way, choose option a.
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Yoga A (1) One of today's hottest fads is also one of the world's oldest practices the ancient art of yoga. (2) Yoga is different from other fitness activities because it is not only physical. (3) In the correct form, yoga is a practice of unification: an emotional, spiritual, and physical exercise. B (4) A simple sitting pose such as staff pose, for example, requiring that you to tighten and lengthen stomach, back, and arm muscles as you stretch your legs out in front of you and place your hands by your side. (5) More difficult poses, such as brave warrior, require you to balance on one leg and hold a pose that strengthens leg, back, and stomach muscles. (6) Though they may seem easy to those who have never practiced, yoga poses require great concentration, and they are surprisingly effective in stretching and strengthening muscles. C (7) While yoga tones and strengthens the body, it also tones and strengthens the mind. (8) Many poses can be only held if you are completely focused on the task, and full benefit of the poses are coming only through proper breathing. (9) Concentrated, deep breathing during yoga helps you extend more fully into the poses. (10) Thereby gaining greater benefit from the stretch. (11) And the steady circulation of breath through you're body both calms and energizes. D (12) I am still relatively new to the practice of yoga. (13) I have been practicing yoga for only one year. (14) I am addicted to yoga unlike any other physical activity because it is also a spiritual practice. (15) Through yoga, I am able to release tensions that lodge in various parts of my body: the tight shoulders, the cramped legs, the belly that is in knots. (16) The physical release is also a spiritual release. (17) I feel calm after doing yoga, reconnected to my body, and reconnected to my inner self. Sentence 6: Though they may seem easy to those who have never practiced, yoga poses require great concentration, and they are surprisingly effective in stretching and strengthening muscles. Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 6?